posing routine video...need advice!

[Iron Bulldog]

2 1/2 weeks out, trying to fine tune my routine...any advice would help. Sorry about the lighting in the video...old camera

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=co8W2VWcIF4 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=co8W2VWcIF4)

[Wiry Pyruvity]

a couple of the transitions look like they're challenging your balance....others are pretty fluid...am on the fence with that trans to side chest...chewing gum didn't help...nor the lighting, perhaps more lateral movement...slowed a little and finishing in crouched shots...one leg extended etc...look good though

[Scoobysnacks]

for your first show nice routine. Id say watch the weird faces in between poses, you smiled sometimes when you hit a shot but other times you looked deep in thought and a bit pained. You want a "look at me" look or a pleasant look, not a constipated look. It should feel second nature. Thats all easier said than done though.

Its WAY better than mine for my first show...

Id also say pose with a little more conviction or attitude if that makes sense, hit a pose hold and know it looks good.

Ill be honest this isnt my strong suit. I need more work on my night routines too. Its just never interested me as much as other aspects.