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    Geoff, here is my copy edit of your first paragraph.

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    The IFBB New York Pro holds the distinction of being the third most prestigious show in its league. Some may argue against this notion, but these disputes are really just an attempt to show respect for the other IFBB pro shows, as opposed to being a serious argument. The New York Pro's dominance is true not only because of the many big-name competitors who show up in New York every year, but also due to the deep history of the show. Once referred to as Night of Champions, the New York Pro has seen more legendary performances and unforgettable story lines than nearly any other IFBB show. This show has also been a launching pad into professional stardom for more than a few future hall-of-fame bodybuilders. This year's show is on shaky ground, but it has the potential to go down as one of the most memorable of its kind.

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    Quote Originally Posted by hifrommike65 View Post
    Geoff, here is my copy edit of your first paragraph.

    (My edit: boldface notes changes)

    The IFBB New York Pro holds the distinction of being the third most prestigious show in its league. Some may argue against this notion, but these disputes are really just an attempt to show respect for the other IFBB pro shows, as opposed to being a serious argument. The New York Pro's dominance is true not only because of the many big-name competitors who show up in New York every year, but also due to the deep history of the show. Once referred to as Night of Champions, the New York Pro has seen more legendary performances and unforgettable story lines than nearly any other IFBB show. This show has also been a launching pad into professional stardom for more than a few future hall-of-fame bodybuilders. This year's show is on shaky ground, but it has the potential to go down as one of the most memorable of its kind.

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    We need commentary like yours, Geoff. Not enough of it exists. Best of luck with your writing.
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    The IFBB New York Pro holds the distinction of being the third most prestigious show in all of professional bodybuilding. Some may argue against this fact, however these disputes are really just an attempt to show respect to all the other pro shows, as opposed to a serious argument. This fact is not only true because of the many big names which show up in New York every year, but also due to the deep history that resides amongst the show. Once referred to as Night of Champions, the New York Pro has seen more legendary performances and unforgettable story lines than nearly every other show. This show has also been a launching pad into professional stardom for more than a few future hall of fame bodybuilders. This years rendition of the show is on shaky ground, but also has the potential to go down as one of the most memorable of its kind.

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    Mike, you're stepping on my spelling nazi jackboots!

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    It fell apart years ago...

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    Night Of Champions / New York Pro
    WINNERS


    1978 - Robby Robinson
    1979 - Robby Robinson
    1980 - Chris Dickerson
    1981 - Chris Dickerson
    1982 - Albert Beckles
    1983 - Lee Haney
    1985 - Albert Beckles
    1986 - Lee Labrada
    1987 - Gary Strydom
    1988 - Phil Hill
    1989 - Vince Taylor
    1990 - Mohammed Benaziza
    1991 - Dorian Yates
    1992 - Kevin Levrone
    1993 - Porter Cottrell
    1994 - Michael Francois
    1995 - Nasser El Sonbaty
    1996 - Ken Wheeler
    1997 - Chris Cormier
    1998 - Ronnie Coleman
    1999 - Paul Dillett
    2000 - Jay Cutler
    2001 - Orville Burke
    2002 - Markus Rühl
    2003 - Victor Martinez
    2004 - Melvin Anthony
    2005 - Darrem Charles
    2006 - Phil Heath
    2007 - Branch Warren
    2008 - Kai Greene
    2009 - Evan Centopani
    2010 - Roelly Winklaar
    2011 - Kai Greene
    2012 - Cedric McMillan
    2013 - Big Ramy
    2014 - Big Ramy
    2015 - Juan Morel
    2016 - Dexter Jackson
    2017 - Sergio Oliva Jr.
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