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    Default 2nd Place in Class B Greater Gulf States

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    do you have any stage shots? stats? from these pics id like to see more v taper, wider delts.

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    i think you need to add more size to back and delts..you waist is wide so that will give u more of a v taper. the shorts need to be less distracting as well

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    I judged this show and you looked good, if memory serves me right the guy who beat u won the overall and is a top 5 national guy, so congrats. Tammy is right about the shorts. A little more thickness up top and try to bring your waist in, obliques.

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    Thanks Tammy and Jude...I'm in the process of working on those things that you've suggested...I appreciate you taking the time

    Ryan

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    You have a very good look for mens physique....I do agree that the shorts are distracting as hell....You look a little shallow to me through the upper chest and delts....I think the delt improvements that have already been mentioned will help you tremendously, both from the front and back....
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